Aww, I love it so much!
I like the cutesy pastel-ish artstyle you've got going on in this piece, which suits the light-hearted theme and my character's general appearance and personality.
I believe this part was an oversight of mine while sending the reference screenshot to you since the bloom in that picture caused the hair and eyes to have a goldish colour, but not gonna lie the slightly golden-coloured hair and eyes do suit her and I think you've done a pretty good job at choosing the colours for her! (Even if it's technically my fault for not providing a proper picture of her lol)
Similar things could be said for the legs as I actually didn't provide the entire picture but you actually aren't far off from what her initial appearance looks like and I really am a fan of the pantyhose and the cute red high heels you gave her as a substitute!
If I had any specific criticism to give it would be that her lower legs look a bit too elongated compared to her body but overall I'm extremely satisfied with the end result!
Thanks again for doing this for everyone else!
-red